Peer Comments

Hello Mr. Drockton,

Good job on your week 1 welcome and Pet Sounds blog entries! Your post describes very well the music and image of The Beach Boys prior to Pet Sounds. The Beach Boys work focus prior to Pet Sounds was truly all in girls and surf. The post discusses well Brian Wilson and his role in Pet Sounds. Mr. Wilson was indeed the genius mastermind behind the Pet Sounds project. It’s amazing how Phil Spector influenced Mr. Wilson towards the creation of Pet Sounds. I like how you discuss the characteristics of the Pet Sounds album. I agree with your statement; “Pet Sounds is a great album”. Good job describing the impression Pet Sounds made in you as a listener and as a professional. I ‘would like if you to shared more about how you think this album could influence your future projects. Good job on your grammar, punctuation, spelling and capitalization. Keep it coming!

Respectfully,
Laurentino Nieves Cruz
lnievescruz@fullsail.edu

http://daviddrockton.wordpress.com/2014/08/11/pet-sounds-in-perspective/

Week 3

Hello Mr. Drokton,

Good job on your Electronic Music Innovations post! Mr. Robert Moog is indeed a huge electronic instrument pioneer. The impact of the Moog Synthesizer is still noticeable in today’s electronic music scene. The Moog Synth is one of the most amazing instruments ever developed! It’s undeniable how the Moog Synth instrument changed electronic music forever. Good job on discussing the impact and characteristics of Mr. Moog’s innovations and contributions to the electronic music genre. Your post clearly describes the impression Mr. Moog made on your personal and professional career. The post references where properly cited and the post has no grammar errors. Keep up the hard work!

Respectfully,

Laurentino Nieves Cruz

lnievescruz@fullsail.edu

http://daviddrockton.wordpress.com/2014/08/24/robert-moog-electronic-instrument-pioneer/

Week 4

Hello Mr. Figueroa,

Good job on your What’s Going On post! Your post describes very well the music and image of Marvin Gaye prior to What’s Going On. Your post discusses the social and national concerns that influenced the music and lyrical content of What’s Going On. Good job explaining the obstacles faced by Marvin Gaye to get What’s Going On recorded and released. Good job describing the impression that What’s Going On made in you as a listener and as a professional. You did an outstanding job discussing the characteristics of What’s Going On! Thanks for adding the source reference pages and having proper grammar, punctuation spelling and capitalization. Keep posting! 

Respectfully,

Laurentino Nieves Cruz

lnievescruz@fullsail.edu

 http://felixafigueroa.wordpress.com/2014/08/16/whats-going-on

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